- From: Jean-Jacques Moreau <jean-jacques.moreau@crf.canon.fr>
- Date: Wed, 14 Mar 2007 18:32:46 +0100
- To: WSD Public <www-ws-desc@w3.org>
Received on Wednesday, 14 March 2007 17:33:35 UTC
[Initial and second attempts did not succeed; resending as zip] As part of my editorial duties, I have proof-read Part1 and found a number of typos (as well as some other items; see below), the most common one being the lack of spaces between words in a fair number of places. I suggest we fix these editorial typos, as well as the proposed word smithing, before we move to PR (and am willing to implement at least a number of them). The potential issues detected, or at least some vagueness in a few but fortunately limited places, could be addressed in a forthcoming errata. I may perform a similar action on Part2. For clarity, the typos are indicated using Word's changes feature. JJ. Sent 14/3/2007, 12:55 CET
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