- From: Jean-Jacques Moreau <jean-jacques.moreau@crf.canon.fr>
- Date: Tue, 27 Feb 2007 12:46:17 +0100
- To: "Amelia A. Lewis" <alewis@tibco.com>
- Cc: "'WSD Public'" <www-ws-desc@w3.org>
Looks good to me overall. Maybe you could copy&paste/adapt the Abstract and Intro from Part1, as was done recently in Part2 (CRxxx), to bring even more uniformity between the different documents. JJ. Amelia A. Lewis wrote: > > Heylas, > > I've just updated the additional meps document, incorporating all the > feedback which I received (from Tom Jordahl, Jean-Jacques Moreau, and > Jonathan Marsh; if your name isn't there but you had some corrections, > please forward them to me again and accept my apologies for losing > track of them). > > Could someone more familiar with the build system regenerate the HTML? > This may address Tom's point (acknowledgements issue; it seems to be > entity-included so a rebuild should fix it). > > Unless I hear otherwise, I'll regard this note as complete. Note that > the major change, in this revision, is drastic reduction of the > Introduction text, per JJM, but adding an explanation of the genesis > of this note there as well. If you have a moment, take a look at that > part. > > Amy!
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