- From: Ramkumar Menon <ramkumar.menon@gmail.com>
- Date: Mon, 5 Feb 2007 15:50:10 -0800
- To: www-ws-desc@w3.org
- Message-ID: <22bb8a4e0702051550r7c444288w7535480e6fe508a3@mail.gmail.com>
Hi Gurus, One suggestion.Part 1 - Appendix E [Assertion Summary] is a great view of all assertions about component models and documents. I would appreciate if the Summary text be a complete English sentence that contains the complete text about the assertion. For instance, see the following assertion. ----------------------------------------------- Assertion Id Summary ----------------------------------------------- Description-1201005 Zero or more element information items amongst its [children], in order as follows: If the User were reading this in soft copy, he/she could click on the Assertion Id hyperlink to navigate to the section that states the assertion. But if the User were reading the specification on a hard print, it would not be possible for he/she to get a clear understanding on what it means. Note that there are other assertions in this section which depict similar behaviour. Hope that helps. rgds, Ram -- Shift to the left, shift to the right! Pop up, push down, byte, byte, byte! -Ramkumar Menon A typical Macroprocessor
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