Primer Review

I reviewed the primer for the HTTP binding and ext/versioning examples.
I did find a few things that need or could use changing.

 

2.5.6

As DavidB suggests, the example should be {checkAvailability}

 

Upon further reflection, I'd suggest changing the section a bit by
having the first example use the safe attribute and then an example that
shows methodDefault, rather than the inverse as is done now.

 

I suggest that example 2-14 just shows setting the defaultMethod.

 

5.2.5.1. Change "The reservation service can accept" to "The reservation
service is changed to a newer version that can accept"

 

5.2.5.3 s/Mandadtory/Mandatory/g

 

5.2.5.5 Formatting of example needs indenting, operation needs closing >

 

5.2.5.7 Formatting of example needs indenting for wsoap:action

 

5.2.5.8.  The example should be

 

<xs:element name="ghns2:makeReservation" type="ghns:tmakeReservation"/>

 

<interface . . .>

   <operation name="makeReservation">

       <input messageLabel="In" element="ghns2:makeReservation" />

</interface>