- From: David Booth <dbooth@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 10 Mar 2004 01:19:55 -0500
- To: "Sanjiva Weerawarana" <sanjiva@watson.ibm.com>, Roberto Chinnici <Roberto.Chinnici@Sun.COM>, "Martin Gudgin" <mgudgin@microsoft.com>, "Jean-Jacques Moreau" <jean-jacques.moreau@crf.canon.fr>, "Jeffrey Schlimmer" <jeffsch@windows.microsoft.com>,
- Cc: www-ws-desc@w3.org
The following are other editorial changes
1. Some text in 2.1.2 about the intent of the targetNamespace overlaps text
in 2.1.1, and would be better merged into the same paragraph.
In particular, I suggest that we move the following text from 2.1.2:
[[
The target namespace represents an unambiguous name for the
intended semantics of the WSDL Infoset. The targetNamespace URI
SHOULD point to a human or machine processable document that
directly or indirectly defines the semantics of the WSDL
Infoset.
]]
to merge it in with existing paragraph in the note of 2.1.1, which
currently says:
[[
The components directly defined within a single Definitions
component are said to belong to the same <emph>target
namespace</emph>. The target namespace therefore groups a set
of related component definitions and provides a hint of the
intended semantics of the components.
]]
such that the existing paragraph in 2.1.1 becomes:
[[
The components directly defined within a single Definitions
component are said to belong to the same <emph>target
namespace</emph>. The target namespace therefore groups a set
of related component definitions and represents an unambiguous
name for the
intended semantics of the components. The targetNamespace URI
SHOULD point to a human or machine processable document that
directly or indirectly defines the intended semantics of
those components.
]]
2. In section "2.2.1 The Interface Component":
s/set of messages/sequence of messages/g
3. We should clearly say that any paragraph marked "Note" is
non-normative. I suggest using the term "Non-normative Note" instead of
just "Note" to mark each Note.
4. Sec 2.3.1.1.1:
s/map between a message and a signature/map between a message type and a
signature/
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David Booth
W3C Fellow / Hewlett-Packard
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Received on Wednesday, 10 March 2004 01:20:02 UTC