- From: Christopher B Ferris <chrisfer@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Mon, 28 Oct 2002 07:42:53 -0500
- To: Hugo Haas <hugo@w3.org>
- Cc: www-ws-arch@w3.org
- Message-ID: <OF19C3CF18.5292CD0A-ON85256C60.00446311-85256C60.0045B793@rchland.ibm.com>
Hugo, Please see below. Cheers, Christopher Ferris Architect, Emerging e-business Industry Architecture email: chrisfer@us.ibm.com phone: +1 508 234 3624 Hugo Haas wrote on 10/28/2002 05:45:08 AM: <snip/> > I agree with Jean-Jacques. I will reiterate what I said about the > mention of SOAP 1.1's submission: I don't think that we need to be > historians of Web services here. We are describing the architecture. Understood. > > Moreover, I would be careful about using the word "standard": for > example, W3C doesn't develop Recommendations. For this particular ??? > instance I would just drop "is the de facto standard for XML based > service description" (the sentence looks weird to me grammatically, > anyway). I would also drop "WSDL has been submitted to the W3C for > standardization." I've amended the sentence based on input from JJ. Okay now? > > As a general rule, I would just try and avoid the word "standard". Understood. > > BTW, Chris, that reminds me that the similar changes that I suggested > about SOAP 1.1[1] were not integrated. > > On the same topic, in the introduction, I would change: > > | The popular Web services standards; SOAP and WSDL, were originally > | developed outside the W3C but are now being refined and standardized > | within the W3C Web Services Activity. These de-facto standards have > | helped by creating and extensible messaging framework (SOAP) , and an > | interface definition language (WSDL) and data encoding conventions > | that facilitate mapping to back end systems. > > into: > > The popular Web services technologies SOAP 1.1 and WSDL 1.1 were > originally developed outside the W3C but are now being used as the > basis for creating an extensible messaging framework (SOAP 1.2) and > an interface definition language (WSDL 1.2) as well as data encoding > conventions that facilitate mapping to back end systems, within the > W3C Web Services Activity. I haven't taken verbatim, but have taken your suggested prose and tweaked it slightly as the last bit: within the W3C Web Services Activity. was ambiguous (e.g. it appeared to imply that the data encoding conventions facilitated mapping to back end systems belonging to the W3C...) > > Regards, > > Hugo > > 1. http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-wsa-comments/2002Oct/0002.html > -- > Hugo Haas - W3C > mailto:hugo@w3.org - http://www.w3.org/People/Hugo/ >
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