GUIDE: Initial Review Comments

Below is a partial list of comments on the OWL  Guide (18 September 2002).  

1.  Delete History section 

2.  Good use of wine example throughout the document.  

3.  Add Appendix to the document to show a complete scenario on how a user
would go about using the language.

4.  Who is the primary audience of the document.  It seems that the guide
assumes that the implementer has prior knowledge of DAML+OIL, 
     Is this assumption correct? If so, does the document need to address
the novice audience? 

Lynne Thompson
Unisys

Received on Thursday, 26 September 2002 12:15:21 UTC