XML validity in QSD

Hi,

in private email it was pointed out to me that Section 4.1 is misleading 
it that it talks about a "valid query", although in practice it will 
only contain the scope.

As this document is already in the IESG's hands, I'd like to make the 
fix as simple as possible, saying

<!ELEMENT query-schema-discovery ANY>
<!-- ANY value: XML element specifying the query grammar
                 and the scope -->

instead of

<!ELEMENT query-schema-discovery ANY>
<!-- ANY value: XML element defining a valid query -->


Feedback appreciated; see also 
<http://greenbytes.de/tech/webdav/draft-reschke-webdav-search-latest.html#rfc.issue.qsd-req-validity>

Best regards, Julian

PS: I plan to submit this as a new draft before Nov 19, which is the 
cut-off date for the 70th IETF 
(<http://www.ietf.org/meetings/70-cutoff_dates.html>).

Received on Friday, 9 November 2007 15:35:38 UTC