validator/share/templates/en_US feedback.tmpl,1.13,1.14

Update of /sources/public/validator/share/templates/en_US
In directory hutz:/tmp/cvs-serv17399/share/templates/en_US

Modified Files:
	feedback.tmpl 
Log Message:
Fix markup and URL acronym + some polishing.

Index: feedback.tmpl
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RCS file: /sources/public/validator/share/templates/en_US/feedback.tmpl,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -d -r1.13 -r1.14
--- feedback.tmpl	20 Jan 2005 08:25:29 -0000	1.13
+++ feedback.tmpl	22 Jan 2005 09:56:43 -0000	1.14
@@ -27,12 +27,13 @@
     <p>
       The two most common problems are:
       <a href="http://www.htmlhelp.com/tools/validator/problems.html#amp">Validating pages with 
-      Ampersands &amp;'s in <acronym title="Universal Resource Locators">URLs</acronym></a>
-      and 
+      ampersands (&amp;'s) in
+      <acronym title="Uniform Resource Locators">URLs</acronym></a> and
       <a href="http://www.htmlhelp.com/tools/validator/problems.html#script">Validating pages with 
       JavaScript: <acronym title="HyperText Markup Language">HTML</acronym>
-        in a <code>SCRIPT</code> Element</a><p>
-        
+        in a <code>SCRIPT</code> Element</a>.
+    </p>
+  <p>
     If your problem isn't covered by one of the resources above,
     you can send it to one of the following forums:
   </p>
@@ -68,7 +69,7 @@
       your query have already been given. </p>
 
   <TMPL_IF NAME="errmsg_id">
-     <p>Below is a pre-filled search box that you can use. Or you can just <a href="http://www.w3.org/Search/Mail/Public/search?type-index=www-validator&amp;index-type=t&amp;keywords=%5BVE%5D%5B<TMPL_VAR NAME="errmsg_id" ESCAPE="URL">%5D&amp;search=Search">follow this link</a></p>
+     <p>Below is a pre-filled search box that you can use. Or you can just <a href="http://www.w3.org/Search/Mail/Public/search?type-index=www-validator&amp;index-type=t&amp;keywords=%5BVE%5D%5B<TMPL_VAR NAME="errmsg_id" ESCAPE="URL">%5D&amp;search=Search">follow this link</a>.</p>
   </TMPL_IF>
 
       <form method="get" action="http://www.w3.org/Search/Mail/Public/search">
@@ -86,7 +87,7 @@
 
   <p>Once you have checked that your suggestion has not been given yet, you can send your message. To write an efficient message:</p>
   <ul>
-    <li><strong>Add a meaningful subject</strong>: summarize your feeedback in a handful of words;</li>
+    <li><strong>Add a meaningful subject</strong>: summarize your feedback in a handful of words;</li>
     <li>If our system added [VE][XX] at the beginning of the mail subject, keep it. 
     Otherwise, please precise which error message you are sending feedback about;</li>
     <li><strong>Always give a URL</strong>: knowing what page you were validating will help us diagnose issues much quicker;</li>
@@ -99,13 +100,13 @@
     <TMPL_ELSE>
       <a href="mailto:www-validator@w3.org?Subject=Error%0Message%20Feedback">send 
     </TMPL_IF>
-   your message to the www-validator public mailing-list</a> 
+   your message to the www-validator public mailing-list</a>.
    </p>
    
 <h3 id="mailinglist">Discuss and participate</h3>
 
 <p>If you are interested in helping to improve this
-    service, by writing code or just providing ideas. you should feel fee to join or send a message to our mailing-list.</p>
+    service, by writing code or just providing ideas, you should feel fee to join or send a message to our mailing-list.</p>
 
     <p>
       The <strong>public</strong> mailing-list to discuss the Markup Validator, Link checker and other tools is

Received on Saturday, 22 January 2005 09:56:46 UTC