passwords in the clear - minor editorial suggestions from Jonathan Rees on 2008-09-25 (www-tag@w3.org from September 2008)

From: Jonathan Rees <jar@creativecommons.org>
Date: Thu, 25 Sep 2008 09:58:44 -0500
To: David Orchard <orchard@pacificspirit.com>
Cc: "www-tag@w3.org WG" <www-tag@w3.org>
Message-Id: <1C6CDAB8-019A-444F-A8A9-B4831CD24F37@creativecommons.org>

"Principle advice" should be "principal advice"

"which are too difficult for the browser to analyze"
=>
"and scripts are difficult or impossible for the browser to analyze"

"provides a way for authentication between parties without transmitting"
=>
"an authentication method that transmits"

In 2.1.1 "Digest" => "Digest Authentication"

2.1.2 second password "SSL/TLS. Any page..."  -- this is a non sequitur.

Received on Thursday, 25 September 2008 14:59:38 UTC