Re: Fw: Remainder of Noah's comments on May 12 Versioning Finding

I've gone through and done most of the changes suggested.  They were
excellent.  Much thanks!

The ones I didn't do:
- the comment about the GPN for language identification, where you said
specifying the meaning of language identifiers is arbitrary and what about
the rest of the languages features, etc.  I didn't want to get into
arbitrary language design.
- I didn't include the point about version numbers/identifiers being a
useful cross-check because that seemed a duplicate of the early warning of
incompatibility.

Cheers,
Dave


On Tue, Jun 10, 2008 at 9:48 AM, <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com> wrote:

> Dave:  can you confirm that you received the attached?  Thank you.
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> Noah Mendelsohn
> 05/30/2008 07:05 PM
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>        To:     "David Orchard" <orchard@pacificspirit.com>
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>        Subject:        Fw: Remainder of Noah's comments on May 12
> Versioning Finding
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> Nuts.  I sent this out a few days ago, and just realized it went to Dave's
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> now defunct BEA mailbox.  I've marked the corresponding action [1]
> pending.  Thank you.
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> [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/group/track/actions/147
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> ----- Forwarded by Noah Mendelsohn/Cambridge/IBM on 05/30/2008 07:02 PM
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> Noah Mendelsohn
> 05/28/2008 08:27 PM
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>        To:     "David Orchard" <dorchard@bea.com>
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>        Subject:        Remainder of Noah's comments on May 12 Versioning
> Finding
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> At the Bristol F2F I handed Dave the first half of my review of Chapter 2.
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>  Attached are scans of the remainder.  New material starts with section
> 2.1.  I apologize for the limited legibility, but I didn't always have a
> good place to write.  If there are bits you can't make out, let me know
> and I'll decode them.  Thanks.
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