- From: <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Fri, 15 Feb 2008 17:30:39 -0500
- To: "David Orchard" <dorchard@bea.com>
- Cc: www-tag@w3.org
Thanks, Dave. I have a couple of editorial comments -------------- Abstract: "The principle advice described" -> The >principal< advice described -------------- Automatic Protection by User agent: "It is tempting to build user agents that refuse to send sensitive data in the clear, or to warn users." I think this sentence parses ambiguously. Is it "(tempting to build user agents that refuse to send sensitive data in the clear) or to warn users" or is it "tempting to (build user agents that refuse to send sensitive data in the clear or to warn users)". -------------- I hope these are helpful. I think I'm OK with the overall content, though hope to find time for a more careful reading before the F2F. Thanks. Noah -------------------------------------- Noah Mendelsohn IBM Corporation One Rogers Street Cambridge, MA 02142 1-617-693-4036 --------------------------------------
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