- From: ashok malhotra <ashok.malhotra@oracle.com>
- Date: Sun, 13 Apr 2008 12:54:30 -0700
- To: orchard@pacificspirit.com
- CC: www-tag@w3.org
Dave: My action was to review only sections 2 and 4 but I ended up reading the entire document in fair detail. My initial reaction was surprise at the scope of the document. You address versioning of all (artificial) languages. With such a broad scope it’s difficult to make sharp recommendations. Thus, the first part of the finding reads like a tutorial on versioning. But then I got to section 5, which is focused on markup languages and their problems i.e. using existing software (browsers) with new versions of the language and the document got much more focused and useful. Thus, the heart of the finding is section 5. So, I feel we should fix the earlier parts and state clearly our focus on markup languages and their problems. Specific Editorial Comments Abstract: “Separate documents contain the terminology definitions and XML language specific discussion”. Please add pointers. 1. Introduction 1. The language should be extensible i.e. … (few words here) 2. “ … text of a language …” I don’t like this. Seems to talk about the documentation. Perhaps you mean “statements of a language” or “sentences in the language” 3. “ .. a given language version should define a set of compatible future version identifiers.” Hard to do since I don’t know what future versions of the language will contain. 1.2 Kinds of Languages Bug in reference under bullet 3. 2.1 Why Have a Strategy? “ … there are many messages that don't use any features of the new version or perhaps it is appropriate to simply ignore components that are not recognized.” You have discussed only language text so far. Where do messages and components come in? “Often, what is needed is some sort of middle ground solution.” What might such a solution look like? Remainder of 2 and 4. You give examples of RSS and HTML but other examples of use/misuse of version numbers and other strategy would be really great! I realize this requires a great deal of work. 5. Java did remove features by marking them as ‘deprecated’and providing compiler warnings and then removing them in later versions. At the end of the section you say “select one of the following 3 alternatives” but there are only 2 alternatives. I prefer the second. 5.1 The SOAP MustUnderstand is not a language feature. It’s a directive to the processor. “Choosing to ignore the container node only helped HTML considerably, but there are some elements who's children also should be ignored for rendering, particularly the /Script/ element.” I’m not sure what you meant to say. Is this sentence missing a “not”. 7. I would remove the last sentence. It seems to have a typo as well. All the best, Ashok Dave Orchard wrote: > Based upon feedback from Noah, the TAG's Feb f2f, and phone > discussions with Noah. > http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/versioning-compatibility-strategies > http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/versioning-compatibility-strategies-20080328.html > These are now ready for review by Ashok, Dan, Noah, Norm, and Raman > per our agreements at the Vancouver F2F in > http://www.w3.org/2008/02/26-tagmem-minutes#ActionSummary > Cheers, > Dave -- All the best, Ashok
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