Near final draft of TAG paper for Enterprise Services Workshop

I've entered all the updates I intend to make prior to submission. 
Experience suggests I do more reliable proofreading in the morning, so 
this won't be proofed until tomorrow AM.  I wanted to get it out so that 
those with an interest in particular changes would have a few hours to 
review them.  So, an unproofed copy is attached. 

Among the changes I've made are:

* WSDL and WADL are now called out explicitly in a bullet in use case 1, 
as well as in the 2nd para of the discussion section

* The suggested readings at the end are now labeled as "references"

* The typos I mentioned earlier are fixed.

* The date in the reference to RFC 3986 is now Jan. 2005

* A paragraph at the bottom of the discussion section discusses the blog 
postings and other writings that David Orchard suggested we mention [1] 

* A few HTML bugs were fixed, so it now checks out as valid HTML 4.01 
Transitional.

I believe this is everything agreed on the call today.  I will respond 
separately to Elliotte Harold, who made a suggestion [2] that I have not 
acted upon.

Please, with just a few hours to go, I'd appreciate it if commentators 
would clearly distinguish suggestions that are fixes to outright errors, 
which I will of course make, from matters of preference or differences of 
perspective, which I will happily read and which will contribute to the 
overall discussion, but which are unlikely to result in changes to the 
submitted draft.  Thank you!

Noah




[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2007Jan/0016.html
[2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/www-tag/2007Jan/0019.html

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Noah Mendelsohn 
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