Comments on generic resources finding

I found three editorial issues in [1]"

Issue I:

Section 2.1: In the text:

"should these different representations: 
Have distinct URIs?
Have a single URI that delivers the appropriate representation?
If publishing distinct URIs for the resource and its various 
representations, how should the relationship between these URIs be 
expressed in a discoverable, machine-readable form? How should this 
relationship be reflected in the hyperlink structure of the Web? "

The 3rd bullet doesn't parse with the sentence that introduces the list.

Issue II:

Section 4:

"URIs are cheap.create them as needed, publish them to the Web, " 
Punctuation.

Issue III:

References

Spelling of my last name in link to metadata finding is wrong.  The 
correct spelling is "Mendelsohn".

Noah

[1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/alternatives-discovery-20060915.html 

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