- From: <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>
- Date: Tue, 30 Mar 2004 17:30:06 -0500
- To: "Ian B. Jacobs" <ij@w3.org>
- Cc: www-tag@w3.org
I like this draft a lot, but want to raise a couple of basically clerical
issues.
Most importantly, you are still linking the PR versions of SOAP 1.2. I
suggest that in your section 6 you consider instead links to:
WebMethod Feature:
http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part2/#WebMethodFeature
Use of RPC on the World Wide Web:
http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part2/#RPConWeb
---and if you want to call out the subsections of the above ---
Identification of RPC Resources:
http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part2/#RPCWebArguments
Disting. Resource Retrievals from other RPCs:
http://www.w3.org/TR/soap12-part2/#RPCResourceRetrieval
I think the first two are the more fundamental links (speaking for myself,
not XMLP).
Also, I found a typo at [1]:
"Indeed, if you use GET for interactions with side-effects, >your< make
your system insecure."
Should be:
"Indeed, if you use GET for interactions with side-effects, >you< make
your system insecure."
Otherwise, looks really good to me. Thanks!
Noah
[1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/whenToUseGet-20040321.html#safe
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