Re: section 1, intro, for review

Point 2 makes HTTP sound like just another protocol.  While I don't
expect an intro section to get into the nitty gritty of the relationship
between it and other protocols, I would prefer it if the special role of
HTTP was at least alluded to.

Also, on that same point, I'm not sure what the mention of
MIME/packaging adds.

Otherwise, very succinct.

MB
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Received on Monday, 18 March 2002 09:49:19 UTC