- From: Helder Magalhães <helder.magalhaes@gmail.com>
- Date: Mon, 24 Nov 2008 14:15:14 +0000
- To: "Ruud Steltenpool" <svg@steltenpower.com>
- Cc: www-svg@w3.org
As Doug and others have already pointed out for similar comments I previously made, some of these weird or incorrect sentences are usually writing style-related which are less obvious for non-native English speakers. Nevertheless, I'd suggest the WG to take a look at them, as they point out less clear text sections which may conduct to misleading interpretations. Without the needed context (Ruud, could you please provide context such as section/subsection within the specification to avoid text find? Thanks!), I leave a set of quick suggestions. > In the case of pinned transform behavior, a new viewport must not be > establish. [1] I'd propose: In the case of a pinned transform behavior, a new viewport must not be established. > Video at the native resolution given by the media shall then painted on a > region whose center is the pin point and whose width and height are defined > by the media [2] I'd propose: Video at the native resolution given by the media shall then be painted on a region whose center is the pin point and whose width and height are defined by the media > The first group will render a scaled and rotated video sequence on a viewer > supporting video transformations while the second group will render the > untransformed video on viewers that doesn't support video transformations. [3] I'd propose: The first group will render a scaled and rotated video sequence on a viewer supporting video transformations while the second group will render the untransformed video on viewers that don't support video transformations. Hope this helps, Helder Magalhães [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/SVGTiny12/single-page.html#multimedia-VideoElement [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/SVGTiny12/single-page.html#multimedia-transformBehaviorAttribute [3] http://www.w3.org/TR/SVGTiny12/single-page.html#multimedia-restrictedVideoExample
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