RE: [SVGMobile12] parseXML method description has some wording that could be improved

Hi Boris,

Thanks very much for your review.  Responses to your comments are inline
below.
 
> From: Boris Zbarsky

> The second paragraph starts with:  "The purpose of the 
> document parameter".  But this method has no parameter named 
> "document".  Similar issue in the last sentence of this paragraph.

The references to the document parameter have been updated with the name
of the parameter, contextDoc, as specified in the IDL.

> Step 3 has "mentionned", which should be "mentioned".

The typo has been fixed.

> I'm not sure what Step 4 means.  parseXML returns a Node.  
> What needs to be cast to Element and why, exactly?  Note that 
> importNode returns a Node...

The note that the return value is cast to Element has been removed.

> The description of the "contextDoc" parameter says: "The 
> Document object in the context of which to produce the 
> parsing.".  I don't think the parsing is being "produced", 
> exactly.  Perhaps "perform"?

Changing "produced" to "perform" makes good sense.  The sentence will be
updated as such.

Please let us know, within two weeks, whether these responses address
your comments.

Thanks

Scott
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Scott Hayman
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Received on Thursday, 23 February 2006 18:42:28 UTC