[SVGMobile12] Comments: Concepts

2.1.2

"SVG gives control.. low quality vector implementations."

Not sure what point this sentence is trying to get across.

2.1.6

s/UDOM/uDOM/

2.2.2

Vague and flowery language for a paragraph that essentially just needs 
to say that SVG documents can refer to SVG fragments both internal and 
external through various methods.

2.2.3

This paragraph wants to say that SVG provides a way of specifying a font 
within SVG, but somehow manages to avoid saying it.

2.3

Embedding by reference: <embed>, while not part of the HTML 
specification, is widely used and should be mentioned.

Received on Thursday, 19 May 2005 01:03:05 UTC