[Timesheets LC comment] 7.1 Attributes

Dear SYMM WG-

This is a Last Call review comment from the SVG WG on the SMIL 
Timesheets 1.0 specification, W3C Working Draft 10 January 2008, 
http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/WD-timesheets-20080110/ .  Please let us know 
if you have any questions by replying to www-svg@w3.org.


"If no explicit target is specified, that is, the animation element does 
not specify the select attribute, the implicit target element is the 
host language element or elements referenced by the parent or ancestor 
item element."

Please define the term 'animation element'.

Please clarify what is meant by 'the implicit target element is the host
language element'.

'parent or ancestor item' seems to allow arbitrary depth nesting of <item>
is that intended?

Please clarify the order in which the implicit target element is resolved.

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"The origin attribute specifies the origin of motion for the animation."

Note that origin has no meaning in SVG. Please add informative text and 
an example showing that.

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"Timesheets uses the select attribute to specify the target element."

The paragraph this sentence start seems to be informative, not 
normative, and should be marked as such.


Regards-
-Doug Schepers, on behalf of the SVG WG

Received on Saturday, 1 March 2008 22:54:14 UTC