Re: Spelling corrections for PR-smil20-20010605

Thank you Susan for your review.

I have corrected these errors for the REC document.

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Susan Lesch" <lesch@w3.org>
To: <www-smil@w3.org>
Sent: Monday, June 11, 2001 8:50 AM
Subject: Spelling corrections for PR-smil20-20010605


> Congratulations on your SMIL 2.0 Proposed Recommendation [1]. It looks
> very nice! Here are the results of spell-checking. I will try to send
> more comments after reading.
> 
> Below a section number is followed by a quote and then a suggestion.
> 
> Table of Contents
> 7.10 Appendicies
> 7.10 Appendices
> 
> 3.2.3 par. 14
> remians
> remains
> 
> 3.2.5
> Similarily
> Similarly
> 
> 3.5
> BasicAnimaion
> BasicAnimation
> 
> Globally in chapter 3
> Bezier
> B&#233;zier or B&eacute;zier
> 
> 3.7.4 path last par.
> attrtibute
> attribute
> 
> 3.9.1 twice
> langauge
> language
> 
> 4.2.2 systemComponent
> mpeg
> MPEG
> 
> 6.4 sourcePlaystate
> precendence
> precedence
> 
> 6.4 accesskey
> Keystroke-actived
> Keystroke-activated
> 
> 8.4 example
> fonctionalities
> functionalities
> 
> Chapter 10 has several missing spaces:
> descriptionwill
> ofendsync
> theelement
> theseq
> isresolved
> synchronizationbehavior
> timecontainer (unless you mean timeContainer)
> isthe
> madeactive
> describedin
> theelement
> playnormally
> anerror
> ofpar
> 
> internet
> Internet
> 
> 11.1.4
> progess
> progress
> 
> 12.6.1
> Are you sure you want to call this "horzRepeat" and not "horizRepeat"?
> 
> Appendix E.
> Marja-RiittaKoivunen
> Marja-Riitta Koivunen
> 
> [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/PR-smil20-20010605/
> 
> Best wishes for your project,
>

Received on Tuesday, 19 June 2001 11:47:11 UTC