Eric's comments on formatting

Hi Eric,

I have a bunch of issues raised by you about formatting and style - I'm not
sure what your particular concern is with these sections so can you give
more details? Thanks

This version of the document isn't quite the latest
http://web.mit.edu/simile/www/resources/researchDrivers-0.27/ 
but I don't think these sections have changed since then?

[ 041. ]
Summary: Text in section 2.4
Raised By: Eric Miller
Status: open
Description: 

2.4 (the first sentence is in fact not one)
hmm... seems like the first sentence in each paragraph in this section
is a sub-point. As its currently formatted this is confusing.

[ 042. ]
Summary: Formatting of section 3.1
Raised By: Eric Miller
Status: open
Description: 

3.1 Formatting of this section makes it difficult to read and comment
effectively.

[ 044. ]
Summary: Formatting in section 3.2.2
Raised By: Eric Miller
Status: open
Description: 

3.2.2 Formatting of this section makes it difficult to read and comment
effectively

[ 047. ]
Summary: Clarity of section 3.2.7
Raised By: Eric Miller
Status: open
Description: 

3.2.7 This is an important section but current version needs to be flushed
out
a bit.

[ 048. ]
Summary: Clarity of section 3.5
Raised By: Eric Miller
Status: open
Description: 

3.5 This is an important section but current version needs to be flushed out
a bit.

Received on Thursday, 8 May 2003 12:59:03 UTC