- From: David Booth <dbooth@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 25 Mar 2005 16:16:18 -0500
- To: public-ws-desc-comments@w3.org
- Cc: Bjoern Hoehrmann <derhoermi@gmx.net>, www-qa@w3.org, Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
Some afterthoughts: Section 8.1 is the one that defines (or will define, once the editorial changes are complete) a "conforming WSDL 2.0 document". (We currently use the term "WSDL document" in a number of places in the spec, so these also need to be changed to "conforming WSDL 2.0 document". Or perhaps we should just make the term be "WSDL 2.0 document", to be slightly briefer.) It occurs to me that it would also make sense to move Part 1 section 8.1 to the beginning of the spec, so that the reader can begin with the overall understanding of what constitutes a conformant WSDL 2.0 document (which is what section 8.1 defines), and then drill down as the spec is read. I suggest moving section 8.1 immediately after section 1.1, so that section 1 would proceed as follows: 1.1 says what WSDL is all about (no change); 1.2 (formerly 8.1) says what consitutes a conformant WSDL 2.0 document; 1.3 (formerly 1.2) says what it means (no change); 1.4 (formerly 1.3) defines notational conventions (no change). On Tue, 2005-03-22 at 16:18, Dan Connolly wrote: > On Tue, 2005-03-22 at 15:23 +0100, Bjoern Hoehrmann wrote: > > * Dan Connolly wrote: > > >p.p.s. I thought I saw a "define your terms" bit in SpecGL, > > >but I don't see it. > > > > http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-qaframe-spec-20041122/#define-terms-section > > Ah... thanks. > > And I see that my comment is redundant w.r.t. Dom's earlier comments > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-desc-comments/2004Aug/0000.html > > to which the WSD WG replied... > > "We agreed to add a definition of WSDL Document as a wsdl:definitions > element and its descendents." > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-ws-desc-comments/2004Sep/0030.html > > > That seems pretty good. I look forward to a new draft so I can check > it in context. -- David Booth W3C Fellow / Hewlett-Packard
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