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- Date: Wed, 12 Mar 2003 01:19 +0900
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Here is a last call comment from Lynne Rosenthal (lynne.rosenthal@nist.gov) on QA Framework : Specifications Guidelines (and Examples and Techniques) received by the LC form system. Submitted on behalf of: Ian Jacobs Comment type: Editorial The comment applies to: "Overall" Comment title: Typos, grammar, etc. Comment: GL 3, 2md para, Remove: "Overall, the intent of the WG should be clear" This doesn't add anything CP 7.1, 7.4, 7.5 ConfReq, last sentence: change 'is' to 'are' in "...if there is no deprecated feature" CP8.4 Rationale: change 'identifying' to 'identify' CP9.1, last para: "This is strict conformance" is a repeat of text in intro of GL9 CP 11.4, last para: modify "proper use of the conformance icons" to "proper use of any conformance icons" GL13, last para: suggest switching the order of Manual of Style and PubRules Proposed resolution : ]] -- This comment was submitted through the lastCall form system, designed by Martin Duerst and Adapted for the QAWG by Olivier Thereaux.
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