Re: ViS cleanup before publication

Hi,

Le samedi 18 juin 2005 à 15:11 -0400, david_marston@us.ibm.com a écrit :
> DHM>Partly done; I haven't introduced the notion of order there,
> since 
> DHM>we don't explain anywhere why the DoV are in such an order. Would 
> DHM>you mind drafting something for section 2? 
> 
>  As for the text, I propose... 
> ========================== New version ======================= 
> ...

Thanks for this, I've incorporated your suggestion into the Editors
version of ViS; I've left the indication about umbrella specs, but will
revisit it if needed after our discussions today.

Dom
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