Re: [SpecGL] Section 2.2 Req A and 4.4 Req B.

Le mercredi 16 février 2005 à 17:01 -0500, Karl Dubost a écrit :

> proposed Text
> 
> Abstract of Changes:
> title:
>       “Define how deprecated feature is handled by each class of 
> product.”
> ---> “Define how deprecated feature is handled.”

I think either "each" is missing, or you need a plural form here (that
was already that way in the old text, though).

> Technique #1:
>   “Consider the effect of deprecation on all classes of products that 
> implement the specification (e.g., authoring tools, converter, user 
> agents).”
> ---> “Consider the effect of deprecation on all products that implement 
> the
> specification (e.g., authoring tools, converter, user agents).”

Hmm... I think this makes it worse, rather than better; the concern that
the XML Core WG raised was that they would have to list all the
potential products implemeting the specs; listing classes of products is
much practical/logical than listing all products...

Dom
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