- From: Fox One <rockman66_1999@yahoo.com>
- Date: Fri, 23 Jun 2000 22:56:51 -0700 (PDT)
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The following are grammatical and spelling errors that I've found in some of the documents in the libwww CVS repository. The words "in diff" mean that the changes have already been made by me and are in the context diff that I'll post in another message. Document: libwww/Library/User/Start.html Problem: The Robot profile initializes a large set of features often used in client applications. Words: in client applications Change: in robot applications Document: libwww/src/HTProfil.html Problem: hence only one reques can be performed Word: reques Change: request Document: libwww/src/HTProfil.html Problem: superseeds the termination function for teh Library core Word: teh Change: the Document: libwww/Library/src/HTLib.html Problem: These two functions initiates memory and settings Word: initiates Change: initialize Document: libwww/Library/src/HTLib.html Problem: is not desired and we can therefore turn it off Word: and Change: , and (place a comma before the `and' to separate the clauses) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: It should be use with care as application Word: use Change: used (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: client version but libwww can in fact also deal Word: but Change: , but (place a comma before `but') Words: in fact Change: , in fact, (set off `in fact' with commas) e.g.: client version, but libwww can, in fact, also deal (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: If the anchor that we have requested is infact a child anchor then we always load the parent anchor and then after the load jump to the location. Change: If the anchor that we have requested is, in fact, a child anchor, then we always load the parent anchor first; after the load, we jump to the location. [The first version was a run-on sentence. "Infact" is not a word.] (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: Errors are like almost anything kept in lists and a error list can be associated with a request using the following functions. Change: Errors are, like almost anything, kept in lists, and an error list can be associated with a request using the following functions. [`Like almost anything' should be set off with commas. A comma should appear befor `and.' `A error' is incorrect; use `an error.'] (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: In order to avoid the Library going into an infinite loop, Word: Library Change: Library's (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: preemptive (blocking I/O) or non-premitve (non-blocking I/O) Word: premitve Change: preemptive (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: For example when loading the first document (the home page) then blocking can be used instead of non-blocking. Changes: For example, when loading the first document (the home page), blocking mode can be used instead of non-blocking. (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: A access scheme is defined with Word: A Change: An (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: That it, it can add any header it likes. Words: That it Change: That is (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/src/HTReq.html Problem: The mempory buffer is considered Word: mempory Change: memory (in diff) Document: libwww/Library/User/Guide/Overview.html Problem: Persistent Cacing Packages Word: Cacing Change: Caching Document: libwww/Library/BeforeCommitting.html Problem: Other peopel must be Word: peopel Change: people
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