Comments for PR-xml-events-20030804

Hello,

These are just a couple of minor comments for your XML Events [1]
Proposed Recommendation. It looks really nice.

     Element listener and its attributes defined in this specification
     is the method of binding a DOM level 2 event at an element to an
     event handler and encapsulates various aspects of the DOM level 2
     event interface, thereby providing markup-level specification of
     the actions to be taken during the various phases of event
     propagation.
could be two sentences (note s/is/are/):
     Element listener and its attributes defined in this specification
     are the method of binding a DOM level 2 event at an element to an
     event handler. They encapsulate various aspects of the DOM level 2
     event interface, thereby providing markup-level specification of
     the actions to be taken during the various phases of event
     propagation.

In the schema, it is a little surprising to see XmlEvents.attlist
instead of XMLEvents.attlist.

The illustration [2] could have a white rather than transparent
background for people with user style sheets set to light on dark.
(I missed this before.)

In the status section, s/members only/Members only/

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/PR-xml-events-20030804/
[2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/PR-xml-events-20030804/images/event-flow.png

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
Susan Lesch           http://www.w3.org/People/Lesch/
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Received on Monday, 1 September 2003 19:44:01 UTC