- From: Steven Pemberton <Steven.Pemberton@cwi.nl>
- Date: Wed, 5 Feb 2003 13:45:09 +0100
- To: <www-html-editor@w3.org>
----- Original Message ----- From: "Christoph Päper" <christoph.paeper@tu-clausthal.de> To: <www-html@w3.org> Sent: Monday, February 03, 2003 7:48 AM Subject: [XHTML2] 4th WD comments > > Just a few comments based on the diff marked version: > > 6.4. Edit Collection > | <p>I will do it next <span class="deleted">week</span> > | <span class="inserted">month</span>.</p> > > Err... you just introduced the 'edit' attribute to replace it by 'class' in > the example? > The defintion is fixed to visual media and CSS. > > 6.6. Embedding Attribute Collection > > The 'table'/PNG example is a good one, the 'p' a very bad one. > > 6.7. Image Map Attribute Collection > > I don't see the need for the 'map'/'usemap'/'id' combination any more, given > that the element that references the map graphic can also contain the links: > > <nl src="navbar1.png" type="image/png" usemap="#"> > <label>Navigate the site:</label> > <li href="guide.html" shape="rect" coords="0,0,118,28">Access Guide</li> > ... > > 7. XHTML Structure Module > > Is the minimal content model for 'head' really just "title"? > > 8.9. The heading elements > | Numbered sections and references > | XHTML does not itself cause section numbers to be generated from > | headings. Style sheet languages such as CSS however allow authors > | to control the generation of section numbers. > > Please provide at least in a sample stylesheet, if not in an inline example, > the code for this. > > 8.10. The hr element > > If 'hr' stays, it--as an empty element--definitely doesn't belong into the > *text* module. > > 8.11. The kbd element > | The kbd element indicates text to be entered by the user. > > Extend meaning to cover other input devices (<kbd>double-click</kbd>)? > > 8.15. The quote element > > The 'quote' element is bad, at least without requiring the UA to indicate it > /somehow/ as a quote. You can't rely on CSS (or a hypothetical other style > language) alone and it's hard to use both, manual quotes *and* CSS generated > ones. I also think, 5 letters is too long, you could just have redefined 'q' > if you wanted. > > 10. XHTML List Module > | <dl> > | <dt><strong>Lower cost</strong></dt> > > Drop the <strong/>s from the example. Suggest stylesheets instead. > > | <dd>young excitable person who may mature > | into a <em>Nerd</em> or <em>Geek</em></dd> > > <em/>s should be <dfn/>s, no? > > I still don't see a way to continue lists with something like <ol > continue="#firstpart">. Neither seem the well known transitional attributes > 'start' and/or 'value' be preparing to return. > > 14.2.1. Referencing object data > | <object > | data="mymovie.mpg" > | type="video/mpeg"> > | A film showing how to open the printer to replace the cartridge. > | </object> > ... > | This user agent cannot process this movie. > > That's giving a *really* bad example to readers. The text should be an > alternative, not a description. There are even more examples showing this > discouraged behaviour. > > In my comments on the previous WD, I said that *if* 'meta' isn't necessarily > an empty element any more, this should also apply to 'link'. I'd like to > extend this statement ot 'param'. This element has almost the same function > for 'object' as 'meta' has for 'html' / 'head' / 'body' and is also just > 'name' -> 'value'. > > 16.1. The style element > | Example: > | <head> > | <style type="text/css">[...]</style> > | </head> > > This is invalid XHTML2. > > 17.2. The col and colgroup elements > | <style type="text/css"> > | #colgrp1 {width: 300} > | #col1 {width: 100} > | #col2 {width: 50} > | </style> > > This is invalid CSS. > > It seems as if *all examples* will have to be carefully checked at some > time, as they often show errors and bad design, and therefor encourage it. > The main reason for this is probably copy&paste from previous versions of > HTML specifications. > I propose using the periodic table of elements instead of a calendar as an > example for correctly using tables. > > I doubt that it's a good choice to order elements alphabetically. > 'Blockquote' and 'quote' for instance are several screen pages apart. > > If you ever seriously come to the question whether to drop 'a', I suppose > you better drop the even more meaningless 'span', which would save 6 bytes > each time. > > Christoph Päper > >
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