- From: Ernest Cline <ernestcline@mindspring.com>
- Date: Wed, 21 May 2003 11:08:55 -0400
- To: www-html@w3.org, www-html-editor@w3.org
(Replies have been directed to www-html only.) This post is a combination of editorial comments and suggestions for changes that could be made in XHTML2. I have not repeated the suggestions I have made concerning firming up the way XHTML2 handles establishing the connection between meta-data and its profile, as those appear to be in the process of being addressed. Other comments that I have made that appear to have been unaddressed so far, I have repeated where I feel that those comments were not purely of a stylistic nature. 1) Section 5.5 Attribute Types I mentioned this in a comment on the fourth working draft (PR#6440) but no resolution has been offered so I'm rementioning it. The first and second tables are inconsistent in that one refers to Attribute Types and the other to Data Types. I recommend that the section refer to attribute types uniformly. 2) Section 5.5 Attribute Types As far as I can tell the NAME attribute type is unused in XHTML2. In HTML4/XHTML1 the NAME attribute type was used only for the name attribute of the meta element and that has been changed to NMTOKEN in XHTML2. I recommend that the NAME attribute type be removed from the working draft. 3) Section 5.5 Attribute Types As far as I can tell the Charsets attribute type is unused. Indeed, I can't even imagine a circumstance in which one would want to indicate multiple charsets in XML. I recommend that the Charsets attribute type be removed from the working draft. 4) Section 5.5 Attribute Types This is a revision to a comment I made on the fourth working draft (PR#6442). The Length attribute type is unused by any attribute in XHTML2. It is used however by the Coordinates attribute type. I recommend that the Length attribute type not have a separate listing, but that its description should be moved to the description of the Coordinates attribute type. 5) Section 5.5 Attribute Types The URIList attribute type is new to XHTML2. In HTML4/XHTML1, the uri-list attribute type is what XHTML2 calls URIs. Since the comma can be a valid URI character, I recommend that all usage of URIList in the working draft be changed to URIs and that the URIList attribute type be removed from the working draft. (See also comment 19 below.) 6) Section 6.5 Hypertext Attribute Collection The sentence "The value of this attribute is a space-separated list of link types." used in the description of the rel and rev attributes is redundant since this is mentioned in the description of the LinkTypes attribute types. It may be worth removing these sentences. 7) Section 6.7 Image Map Attribute Collection Could the image map shapes be more closely aligned with the Basic Shapes Module from SVG? To completely do so, three changes that can be separately implemented would be required. 7a) Ellipses Add "ellipse" to the list of values for the shape attribute. Ellipse would expect four coordinates to be provided: center-x, center-y, radius-x, radius-y. 7b) Rounded Rectangles Add rounded rectangles to the possible shapes. This would mean that when the shape attribute is "rect", That four, five, or six coordinates could be provided. When four are provided, no rounding occurs. When five are provided, the fifth coordinate is used as the rounding radius for the corners. When six are provided, the fifth coordinate is used as the horizontal rounding radius (radius-x) and the sixth is used as the vertical rounding radius (radius-y). 7c) Change Rectangles from LTRB to LTWH This change gives no new ability but only serves to align the way rectangles are specified in XHTML with the way they are specified in SVG. Whether this change should be made it boils down to whether it is considered more important to have consistency with SVG or with previous versions of (X)HTML. It definitely should be made only if the other two changes are also made, since without the other changes, there is no reason to make this change to impose consistency with SVG, as the lack of all the basic filled shaped that SVG provides means that there could be no consistency. If the change is made made, then the first four coordinates provided for a rectangle would be changed from: left-x top-y right-x bottom-y to: left-x top-y width-x height-y 8) Section 6.9 Style Attribute Collection The issue is raised in the fifth working draft of a desire of providing a generic method af specifying the attributes that contain style information. Two possible solutions come to mind. 8a) Add an xml-styleattr PI Add a new PI: xml-styleattr. This would have the pseudo-attributes alternate, media, title and type with the same syntax as the xml- stylesheet PI. There would also be an "attr" attribute that would be a CDATA #REQUIRED pseudo-attribute."attr" would take a space separated list. The XHTML2 DTD could include <?xml-styleattr type="text/css" attr="html:style"?> 8b) Replace xml-stylesheet PI with xml-style PI This would be similar to xml-stylesheet but would allow for three ways of specifying the location of style information instead of just one. It would have the pseudo-attributes alternate, media, title and type with the same syntax as the xml-stylesheet PI. The href attribute from xml-stylesheet and the attr attribute from the xml-styleattr proposal above would also be present, but changed from #REQUIRED to #IMPLIED. In addition, a space separated list of element names that provide style information for a document could be provided as a CDATA #IMPLIED pseudo- attribute named "elem". The XHTML2 DTD could include <?xml-style type="text/css" attr="html:style" elem="html:style"?> 9) Section 7.4 The body element Other than tradition, is there a reason to not allow Inline or PCDATA as acceptable content for the body element? This would simplify the Minimal Content Model of body to (PCDATA|Flow)* 10) Section 8 The Block Text Module A proliferation of blockXXX elements is occurring. (We now have blockquote and blockcode, and discussion on www-html has mentioned the strong possibility of blocksamp being added.) Might I suggest that instead we have but a single element: block. The block element would indicate that a user agent should have a default method, such as indenting in a visual agent, to indicate that the contents are a coherent group (as opposed to section or div, which have no such recommendation.) The exact method of indicating this would be up to the user agent and of course could be altered by styling information. The white space preservation properties of the blockcode element should be made part of the code element. 11) Section 8.8 The pre element Is this element really needed? If the white space preservation property was attached to code, kbd, and other appropriate computing elements , then one major use of pre would be taken care of. The other major use presented as an example, poetry, seems to be adequately taken care of by the l element. Is there any other remaining semantic use of white space that couldn't be handled by xml:space in the remaining rare cases? 12) Section 8.9 The section element The word "explicitely" should be "explicitly" with no second e. 13) Section 9.The Inline Text Module Why not make white space preservation part of the standard values for the code and kbd elements? Since an author might or might not wish to have sample output be white-space preserving, that property should be handled by the xml:space attribute or the pre element if it is retained in that case in that case. 14) Section 9.11 The strong element There must be some way of indicating the intensity of emphasis. Nested em's are insufficient as for example, it is impossible to tell in CSS to know if even em > em::first-child > is a a single application of strong emphasis or a phrase which begins with something emphasized in a a section of emphasis that then later ends the internal emphasis, reverting to ordinary emphasis. Even using three or more em's to indicate strong emphasis is insufficient. While it allows an author to know when he means strong emphasis as opposed to emphasis within emphasis, leaves others clueless unless they rely upon the presentation (i.e. bold text) to indicate when text is strongly emphasized. Either strong needs to be retained or em needs one or more attributes added to it to indicate the degree and/or type of emphasis. 15) Section 11.1 Definition lists There needs to be an element that can group together (dt+, dd+) groupings. A div of dl's is the best improvisation that can be done right now to achieve the desired presentation effect, but that is wrong for XHTML2 since that implies semantically a group of different definition lists. I propose that a <di> element (definition item) be added to the content model of of <dl>. I.e., make definition lists have the following DTD fragment: <!ELEMENT dl (dd | di | dt)+> <!ELEMENT di (dt+, dd+)> <!ELEMENT dt (#PCDATA | %Inline;)*> <!ELEMENT dd (#PCDATA | %Flow;)*> 16) Section 12.1.2 Links and external style sheets Given that there exist two other ways XHTML2 could specify an external stylesheet: <?xml-stylesheet type="text/css" href="style.css"?> <style type="text/css" src="style.css" /> is there any need to keep the <link> mechanism for accessing external style sheets? Eliminating it from XHTML2 would allow the media attribute to be removed from the link element. 17) Section 13.1 The meta element I noticed that the http-equiv attribute is being dropped. PICS appears to depend upon this attribute. Is there some other method of specifying PICS meta-data, or is PICS support being dropped in XHTML2? 18) Section 13.1 The meta element According to (PR #6217) a decision was made on 15 January 2003 to restore the scheme attribute to the meta element. This change has not yet been made in the working draft. 19) Section 14.1 The object element There is a change introduced in the archive attribute in XHTML2. In HTML4/XHTML1, the uri-list attribute type used by the archive attribute was what XHTML2 calls URIs, not URIList. Since the comma can be a valid URI character, I recommend that the attribute type of the archive attribute be changed to URIs. (See also comment 5 above.) 20) Section 14.1 The object element The object element and the Embedding Attribute Collection both provide a means of embedding other data into an XHTML document. The Embedding Attribute Collection deals with simple embedding, whilst the Object Module deals with more complex embedding. However, the use of the type attribute in the object element to indicate the ContentType of the URI of the data attribute conflicts with the use of the type attribute to indicate the ContentType of the src attribute of the Embedded Attribute Collection. I see two ways of solving the problem. 20a) Since the object element and the Embedding Attribute Collection both deal with embedding, drop the data attribute and use the src attribute from the Embedding Attribute Collection to indicate the location of the object's data. 20b) Since the object element and the Embedding Attribute Collection deal with different types of embedding, keep the data attribute and use a different attribute such as datatype to indicate the ContentType of the URI of the data attribute. 21) Section 14.2 The param element Doesn't the param element still need the type attribute (or an equivalent, if XHTML reserves type to indicate only the ContentType of the src attribute) to indicate the ContentType of the URI given by value when valuetype="ref"? 22) Section 19.1 The caption element As has already been noted in the fifth working draft, since caption now applies to object as well as table it needs to be placed in a module of its own. Might not caption however, be profitably extended to other block elements? For example: <blockquote> <caption>The Gettysburg Address</caption> <l>A. Lincoln</l> <l>87 Years Ave.</l> <l>Gettysburg, PA</l> </blockquote> or: <div src="/images/lastsupp.jpg"> <caption>The Last Supper by Leonardo di Caprio</caption> </div>
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