- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Sat, 17 Nov 2001 23:49:43 -0800
- To: www-html-editor@w3.org
These are minor comments for your Last Call Working Draft at http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/WD-xml-events-20011026/ In Status of This Document, member (twice) -> Member and membership -> Membership The illustration in 1. is beautiful! Should the right-hand line coming from Root be black? Also in 1., targetted (twice) -> targeted and targetting -> targeting In 2, XML Namespaces [NAME] -> XML namespaces [NAME] or Namespaces in XML [NAME] In 2.1, mouseclicks -> mouse clicks (to match 1.) In 2.4, summarises -> summarizes You might add dates to each reference in B. Best wishes for your project, -- Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819 World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org
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