- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Sat, 21 Apr 2001 16:45:31 -0700
- To: www-html-editor@w3.org
Belated congratulations on your XHMTL 1.1 Proposed Recommendation [1].
Just a few minor comments.
Appendix B is named 2.
In "This version," Postscript -> PostScript
In 2., the first paragraph could say:
The key words "MUST", "REQUIRED", "SHOULD", and "MAY", in this
document are to be interpreted as described in [RFC2119].
with RFC 2119 as a normative reference. http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt
In A. list items 1 and 2, (as defined in [XHTMLMOD]. -> (as defined
in [XHTMLMOD]).
In A. list item 3, (as defined in [RUBY]. -> (as defined in [RUBY]).
In References XMLNAMES, Recomendation -> Recommendation
In C., Copyright 1998-2000 (twice) -> Copyright 1998-2001
[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2001/PR-xhtml11-20010406/
Best wishes for your project,
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Susan Lesch - mailto:lesch@w3.org tel:+1.858.483.4819
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) - http://www.w3.org/
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