- From: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
- Date: Thu, 13 Jan 2000 20:29:51 -0800
- To: www-html-editor@w3.org
Here is a minor typo report for your "XHTML 1.1 - Module-based XHTML" [1] last call draft "work in progress." [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/WD-xhtml11-20000105/ A section number is followed by a quote and then my idea of the correct usage. 1. presentation oriented functionality presentation-oriented functionality style-sheets style sheets 2.1.1. A Strictly Conforming XHTML 1.1 Document is A strictly conforming XHTML 1.1 document is to use XML declarations in all their documents. to use XML declarations in all of their documents. 3. XHTML Modules XHTML modules [not sure about this but when in doubt I don't capitalize] B.1. [XHTML1], [XHTMLMOD], [RUBY] et. al. et al. B.2. [RFC-1808] [RFC1808] B.2. [TIDY] well formed XML well-formed XML i.e. i.e., C.2. XHTML 1.1 Driver As in the file template.dtd, I would make each instance of "this serves" -> "This serves" if you want a sentence ending in a period. Also, I would regularize the capitalization of "reserved" and "required." Good luck with your project. -- Susan Lesch susan@textet.com http://www.textet.com/
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