editorial comments against HTML 4

• From: Al Gilman <asgilman@access.digex.net>
• Date: Sun, 3 Aug 1997 21:33:35 -0400 (EDT)
• To: www-html-editor@w3.org
• Cc: asgilman@access1.digex.net (Al Gilman)
• Message-Id: <199708040133.VAA16557@access1.digex.net>

Some editorial comments to HTML 4.0 (draft of 8 July 1997)

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p. 14, the word "dissuasive" will lead to confusion.  I believe you wish
to mean "fails to be persuasive" whereas it actually means "is persuasive
of a negative conclusion."  Recommend you use plainer language, here.

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p. 17, The bald assertion that numeric entities "end with a
semicolon" is inaccurate.  See note at p. 30 and fix p. 17
accordingly.

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p. 52.  Where it says "englobing" I believe you mean to say "enclosing."

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Al Gilman

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