Comments on pre-CR draft

• From: François Yergeau <francois@yergeau.com>
• Date: Wed, 28 Aug 2002 14:48:35 -0400
• To: www-forms-editor@w3.org
• Message-ID: <3D6D1B03.3080108@yergeau.com>

Dear XForms WG,

I'm looking at appendix G.1 of your pre-CR draft 
(http://www.w3.org/TR/2002/WD-xforms-20020821/sliceG.html#xforms-in-xhtml-00). 
  The French in the first example is not very good, here are some 
suggested fixes:

"Choisissez la méthode de paiement" -> "Choisissez un mode de paiement"

"Cash" -> "Comptant"

"Veuillez ne pas expédier l'argent comptant." -> "Ne pas envoyer 
d'argent comptant par la poste."

"Nombre de Carte de Banque" -> "Numéro de carte bancaire"

"Date d'échéance."  -> remove the final period.

"Achat" -> "Achetez"

-- 
François Yergeau

Received on Wednesday, 28 August 2002 14:48:42 UTC