Editorial comments on DPF from Keith Waters on 2005-05-31 (www-di@w3.org from June 2005)

From: Keith Waters <kwaters@ftrd.us>
Date: Tue, 31 May 2005 15:17:35 -0400
To: www-multimodal@w3.org
Cc: www-di@w3.org
Message-Id: <4DF7D220-FCE8-43E2-8C17-C38B3B4820E2@ftrd.us>

Hi Jeremy,

This message contains a response to comments on

http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-DPF-20041122/

e1:
section 2
Use of word Properties in list

The word 'Properties' is used in two different ways, in
a confusing manner in the numbered list.
In point 1 it is used to refer to the property as a relationship
between things, an abstraction. In points 3 and 6 what seems to be
being discussed is property values (in particular instances)

Suggest s/Properties/Property values/ in points 3. and 6.

The DPF Working Group agrees and has made the suggested edit.

-Keith Waters

Received on Wednesday, 1 June 2005 00:01:25 UTC