Re: Editorial comment on Understanding document

Good edits
  I might tweak the last one to be more readable.

Gregg
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Gregg Vanderheiden Ph.D.
Director Trace R&D Center
Professor Industrial & Systems Engineering
and Biomedical Engineering
University of Wisconsin-Madison

On Jun 18, 2010, at 5:23 PM, Loretta Guarino Reid wrote:

>>      whether the Success Criterion would impose limits on the "look &
>> feel" and/or function of the Web page (in other words, limits on function,
>> presentation, freedom of expression, design or aesthetic that the Success
>> Criteria might place on authors)
> 
Change to 

     whether the Success Criterion would impose limits on the "look &
feel" and/or function of the Web page (in other words, would the success criteria 
impose limits on function, presentation, freedom of expression, design or aesthetic.)