- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 21 Sep 2022 20:56:56 -0500
- To: Michele Williams <mawconsultingllc@gmail.com>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors@w3.org
Thank you very much, Michele! Comments inline below. for reference: * preview: https://deploy-preview-35--wai-wcag-redesign.netlify.app * known issues: https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/pull/35#issuecomment-1248890252 On 21-Sep-22 2:31 PM, Michele Williams wrote: > Found the following while exploring (mostly randomly spot-checking the various pages): > > *UNDERSTANDING DOCS* > *Global* - no "skip navigation" links are present /(mentioned during a past meeting)/ documented under "Things that are in some pages, but not propagated throughout yet" in https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/pull/35#issuecomment-1248890252 > > *Global* - if you're on the last SC or Guideline in a series, "Next ->" shows up and is active in the navigation but doesn't move the page; this is confusing - seems like it should just keep moving down the line; example: https://deploy-preview-35--wai-wcag-redesign.netlify.app/understanding/non-text-content <https://deploy-preview-35--wai-wcag-redesign.netlify.app/understanding/non-text-content> documented under "Known issues with this preview" in https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/pull/35#issuecomment-1248890252 > > *Global-ish* - when I spot-check the "Techniques" pages, there's about 50% that have empty bullets; I would ensure each page is thoroughly QAed prior to publication documented under "Known issues with this preview" in https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/pull/35#issuecomment-1248890252 pointing to https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/issues/22 content bug > > *"All Understanding Docs" page* - would be really helpful if the "Page Contents" side navigation offered an additional way to shortcut through the links - such as adding links to jump to Perceivable, Operable, Understandable, and Robust as sections; right now keyboard users have a lot of Tabs to go through if they start on this page documented under "Known issues with this preview" in https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/pull/35#issuecomment-1248890252 with pointer to more robust solution https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/issues/6 [Understanding index page] structure (fyi, this one is at risk for not getting implemented in the first iteration. if so, maybe we can do https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/pull/1#issuecomment-1254376776 ) > > *"SC 2.5 Input Modalities" page* - has an empty "Benefits" section: https://deploy-preview-35--wai-wcag-redesign.netlify.app/understanding/input-modalities <https://deploy-preview-35--wai-wcag-redesign.netlify.app/understanding/input-modalities> huh. looks like that's a content / source file issue as it's also missing in the existing 2.1 and 2.2 documentation. - empty Benefits section in Understanding Guideline 2.5: Input Modalities in [2.1](https://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG21/Understanding/input-modalities#benefits) and [2.2](https://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG22/Understanding/input-modalities#benefits) Are you up for filing an issue in the WCAG repo? > > *TECHNIQUES DOCS* > Nothing much except it's really unfortunate that most code examples use red & green to call out differences (& brown seems to be primary tertiary). Not sure if that can be revisited one day. ug. I thought the color in the code had already been nixed. sigh. I added it to a new section "other" in https://github.com/w3c/wcag-redesign/pull/35#issuecomment-1248890252 > > Randomly I found on this page that "Other Sources" is empty: https://deploy-preview-35--wai-wcag-redesign.netlify.app/techniques/general/g217 <https://deploy-preview-35--wai-wcag-redesign.netlify.app/techniques/general/g217> looks like another content / source file issue as it's also missing in the existing 2.1 and 2.2 documentation. - empty Related Resources section in G217 (and maybe others?) in [2.2](https://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG21/Techniques/general/G217#resources) and [2.2](https://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG22/Techniques/general/G217#resources) Are you up for filing an issue in the WCAG repo? > > > Ta ta for now! Thanks! ~Shawn
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