- From: Daniel Montalvo <dmontalvo@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 26 Jul 2022 13:06:42 +0200
- To: <belton@tpgi.com>
- Cc: <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hey Brian, Thanks for your comments, and sorry for the late reply. Updated draft is at https://content-author-modules--wai-curricula.netlify.app/curricula/content-author-modules See my comments below. > > --------------------------------- > > Content Author Module 1: Clear Content > > > > ---- > > Please focus on Content Author Module 1: Clear Content. > > * Are all points covered - is anything missing? > > * Is there anything in there that should not be in there? > > You can comment below or leave a GitHub Issue about Content Author > > Module > > 1: Clear Content. > > > Comments: > There is an odd character in the teacher competencies section (the last bullet point) - it is a back tick and asterisk, which seems incorrect, > but also visually they are pushed together and appear as one character - "Foundation Prerequisites ` * Accessible authoring tools" (I think it > is just supposed to me a new bullet point) Fixed. > In the teaching ideas for titles and links, the second bullet point has clunky wording - "This is why some authoring tools provide the same > information in the page title and in the first heading of level one." > Perhaps update to "This is why some authoring tools provide the same information in the page title and in the level one heading." > (practicing what we preach and using the active voice) Changed. > > --------------------------------- > > Content Author Module 2: Structure > > > > ---- > > Please focus on Content Author Module 2: Structure. > > * Are all points covered - is anything missing? > > * Is there anything in there that should not be in there? > > You can comment below or leave a GitHub Issue about Content Author > > Module 2: Structure. > > > Comments: > Not sure if intentional, but the Student competencies does not include "Prior Content Author Modules". The teaching competencies > specifies module 1, so perhaps we need to look at a consistent way to refer to the other modules in all competencies sections. Added. I meant to include it for the students as well for consistency. > > --------------------------------- > > Content Author Module 3: Forms > > > > --------------------------------- > > Content Author Module 4: Images > > > > ---- > > Please focus on Content Author Module 4: Images. > > * Are all points covered - is anything missing? > > * Is there anything in there that should not be in there? > > You can comment below or leave a GitHub Issue about Content Author > > Module 4: Images. > > > Comments: > Not sure if intentional, but the Student competencies does not include "Prior Content Author Modules" Added. I meant to include it for the students as well for consistency. > Regards, > > The Automatic WBS Mailer -- Daniel Montalvo Accessibility Education and Training Specialist W3C/WAI
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