RE: [wbs] response to 'Review 1 of Evaluation Videos'

Possibly:

"Some checks are simple. For example, looking at the text displayed in the browser window"

?

Thanks

Kevin

Kevin White
Head of Digital Accessibility
Phone – 0131 244 7811 (Extension 47811)
Mobile – 07827 991 786

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
> Sent: 22 November 2019 07:28
> To: White K (Kevin) <Kevin.White@gov.scot>; wai-eo-editors@w3.org
> Subject: Re: [wbs] response to 'Review 1 of Evaluation Videos'
> 
> Hi Kevin,
> 
> On 18/11/2019 18:36, Kevin White via WBS Mailer wrote:
> > Text: 00:53: “Some checks are as simple as looking at the text
> > displayed in the browser window”. Isn’t it more accurate to say “One
> > check is as simple as looking at the text displayed in the browser window”.
> > Medium.
> 
> This was one of your comments on Video 2.
> 
> We wanted to convey that some checks, not only one, are as simple as doing this
> particular example task. With "one", this meaning is not conveyed. Do you have
> other suggestions?
> 
> Thanks,
>    Shadi
> 
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> Technology Specialist Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) World Wide Web
> Consortium (W3C)
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