Re: [wbs] response to 'Review 2 of Evaluation Videos'

On 12/12/2019 16:10, Shawn Henry wrote:
> Hi Shadi,
> 
> On 12/12/2019 5:34 AM, Shadi Abou-Zahra wrote:
>> Hi Shawn,
>>
>>
>> On 12/12/2019 04:42, Shawn Henry via WBS Mailer wrote:
>>>> Video 4: Comprehensive Evaluation (2nd Draft)
>>>>
>> [SNIP]
>>>>
>>> Comments:
>> [SNIP]
>>>
>>>> 0:56 use people with different colors in front of computers, similar to
>>> Video 1 at 1:30
>>>
>>> I think better to stay with the images in the circle since these are all
>>> bullet points of the same thing: “To do effective conformance 
>>> evaluation,
>>> you need expertise in: * accessibility standards, * accessible web 
>>> design
>>> and development, * assistive technologies, * and how people with
>>> disabilities use the Web. (Although maybe good to have people at 
>>> computer,
>>> but then would be too small.)
>>
>> I don't understand your comment, can you please clarify?
> 
> Starting around 0:44
> 
> The narration is of a bullet list : “To do effective conformance 
> evaluation, you need expertise in:
> * accessibility standards
> * accessible web design and development
> * assistive technologies
> * and how people with disabilities use the Web."
> 
> The visuals with that are:
> - To do effective conformance evaluation,  -- *circle* with "conformance 
> evaluation" in it
> - you need expertise in
>   * accessibility standards -- *circle* with award in it
> * accessible web design and development -- *circle* with markup and 
> paintbrush
> * assistive technologies -- *circle*with AT icons
> * and how people with disabilities use the Web. -- *circle* with 3 people
> 
> [medium-low] I think we want to keep the primary *circle* image for each 
> bullet point, to help them tie together. - help it be clear that all of 
> those things are "you need expertise in", including "how people with 
> disabilities use the Web". I don't think we want to replace the circle 
> image for the last bullet point. We could change what is in the circle.
> 
> However, I don't feel strongly about that at all.

OK, I think I now understand - you are commenting on the change request 
rather than on the video itself! Duh. I should have used numbered list. 
Yes, no intention of removing the circle.


> I went and looked at the other bulleted lists in this video...
> 
> Bullet points are clearly related at 1:30.
> 
> Starting at 0:17
> Often you'll want to do conformance evaluation:
> * as a final check before releasing a product -- box with check
> * in order to provide information to potential purchasers of your 
> product -- + (i) icon
> * to regularly monitor the accessibility of your website -- + magnifying 
> glass on computer
> * before procuring a product -- + shopping cart
> * and when getting started with implementing accessibility, to get a 
> list of accessibility issues that you need to address. -- the 4 items 
> disappear :( then a rocket takes off, then a list appears.
> 
> Maybe we want all those things together in the same visual, since they 
> are all items of the same list of "Often you'll want to do conformance 
> evaluation"?
> 
> Again, I don't feel strongly about this.

OK, new issue noted.


Best,
   Shadi


> HTH,
> ~Shawn
> 
>>
>> Thanks,
>>    Shadi
>>

-- 
Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/
Accessibility Strategy and Technology Specialist
Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
World Wide Web Consortium (W3C)

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