Re: [wbs] response to 'Showcase Video, final script approval: Scripts 1 - 5'

Hi Howard,

Thank you for your review and comments!

I opened an issue regarding your concerns with Script #5:
  - https://github.com/w3c/wai-showcase-examples/issues/114

Could you please respond in Github or by replying to this email on your 
specific concerns? Suggestions for improvement would be really helpful.

Thanks,
   Shadi


On 25.2.2016 03:45, Howard Kramer via WBS Mailer wrote:
> The following answers have been successfully submitted to 'Showcase Video,
> final script approval: Scripts 1 - 5' (Education and Outreach Working Group)
> for Howard Kramer.
>
>>
>> ---------------------------------
>> About this survey
>> ----
>> This survey is for EOWG review and approval of the first *five*  scripts
>> for Showcase Examples with Videos. We have completed two rounds of
>> review, made edits based on your comments  and would appreciate your
>> final approval.
>>
>> Please consider our time constraints and only offer objections if they
>> are relevant and strong ones.
>> Questions to consider include:
>>   * Have your previous comments been sufficiently addressed?
>>     * Do have any strong objections to the revised scripts?
>>     * Are we OK to move the scripts into production?
>>
>>
>
> I really liked 1 - 4 and had no suggestions for changes. It's hard to judge
> 5 without seeing what specifically will be shown on the screen. It didn't
> seem as clear as the first 4.
>
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------
>> Script 1: Video Captions
>> ----
>> Please review Script 1: Video Captions and add any comments in GitHub as
>> new issues or pull requests. If you are not comfortable with GitHub,
>> please add your comments below.
>> (If it helps your review: diff-markup of changes to the 12 February.)
>>
>
>   * (x) I reviewed it and have no objections - produce it!
>   * ( ) I am pretty happy with the revised script but suggest you to
> consider my comment (at the discretion of the Task Force). Suggestion only,
> not a show stopper - in GitHub or below.
>   * ( ) I do have a *strong* (showstopping) objection and have commented in
> GitHub or below.
>   * ( ) I didn't get to it; I will pass on commenting on the document and
> accept the decisions of the Group.
>
>
>
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------
>> Script 2: Color Contrast
>> ----
>> Please review Script 2: Color Contrast and add any comments in GitHub as
>> new issues or pull requests. If you are not comfortable with GitHub,
>> please add your comments below.
>> (If it helps your review: diff-markup of changes to the 12 February.)
>>
>
>   * (x) I reviewed it and have no objections - produce it!
>   * ( ) I am pretty happy with the revised script but suggest you to
> consider my comment (at the discretion of the Task Force). Suggestion only,
> not a show stopper - in GitHub or below.
>
>
>
>
>   * ( ) I have a *strong* (showstopping) objection and have commented in
> GitHub or below.
>   * ( ) I didn't get to it; I will pass on commenting on the document and
> accept the decisions of the Group.
>
>
>
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------
>> Script 3: Voice Recognition
>> ----
>> Please review Script 3: Voice Recognition and add any comments in GitHub
>> as new issues or pull requests. If you are not comfortable with GitHub,
>> please add your comments below.
>> (If it helps your review: diff-markup of changes to the 12 February.)
>>
>
>   * (x) I reviewed it and have no objections - produce it!
>
>
>   * ( ) I am pretty happy with the revised script but suggest you to
> consider my comment (at the discretion of the Task Force). Suggestion only,
> not a show stopper - in GitHub or below.
>
>   * ( ) I do have a *strong* (showstopping) objection and have commented in
> GitHub or below.
>
>   * ( ) I didn't get to it; I will pass on commenting on the document and
> accept the decisions of the Group.
>
>
>
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------
>> Script 4: Text to Speech
>> ----
>> Please review Script 4: Text to Speech and add any comments in GitHub as
>> new issues or pull requests. If you are not comfortable with GitHub,
>> please add your comments below.
>> (If it helps your review: diff-markup of changes to the 12 February.)
>>
>
>   * (x) I reviewed it and have no objections - produce it!
>   * ( ) I am pretty happy with the revised script but suggest you to
> consider my comment (at the discretion of the Task Force). Suggestion only,
> not a show stopper - in GitHub or below.
>   * ( ) I do have a *strong* (showstopping) objection and have commented in
> GitHub or below.
>   * ( ) I didn't get to it; I will pass on commenting on the document and
> accept the decisions of the Group.
>
>
>
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------
>> Script 5: Layout and Design
>> ----
>> Please review Script 5: Layout and Design and add any comments in GitHub
>> as new issues or pull requests. If you are not comfortable with GitHub,
>> please add your comments below.
>> (If it helps your review: diff-markup of changes to the 12 February.)
>>
>
>   * ( ) I reviewed it and have no objections - produce it!
>
>
>
>   * (x) I am pretty happy with the revised script but suggest you to
> consider my comment (at the discretion of the Task Force). Suggestion only,
> not a show stopper - in GitHub or below.
>   * ( ) I do have a *strong* (showstopping) objection and have commented in
> GitHub or below.
>   * ( ) I didn't get to it; I will pass on commenting on the document and
> accept the decisions of the Group.
>
> As mentioned above, I didn't find this script as effective. I think from
> shot 4 on it's a little confusing - relying a lot on facial expressions it
> seems.
>
>>
>> These answers were last modified on 25 February 2016 at 02:43:15 U.T.C.
>> by Howard Kramer
>>
> Answers to this questionnaire can be set and changed at
> https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/showcase2/ until 2016-02-25.
>
>   Regards,
>
>   The Automatic WBS Mailer
>
>

-- 
Shadi Abou-Zahra - http://www.w3.org/People/shadi/
Activity Lead, WAI International Program Office
W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)

Received on Thursday, 25 February 2016 09:36:29 UTC