- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 17 Sep 2015 14:19:14 -0500
- To: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
ummmm. quick thoughts: * I think it needs "below" to explain it. And/Or, maybe there's a better word than "category". * "below" is relevant to all users, afaik, based on DOM order. * F14 "Failure of Success Criterion 1.3.3 due to identifying content only by its shape or location" -- we're not describing it *only* by location, we're also saying "category" :-) How about: There may be information relevant to your work in more than one of these Tips pages. or, front-loading it: More than one of these Tips pages may provide information relevant to your work. ~Shawn On 9/17/2015 12:56 PM, Kevin White wrote: > Hi Shawn, > > Thanks for this. > > Can I make a minor edit and delete the final ‘below’. So: > > Get started with accessibility. These tips introduce some basic considerations for making your website more accessible to people with disabilities, and provide links to additional guidance. There may be tips relevant to your work in more than one category. > > I have minor niggle about F14 <http://www.w3.org/TR/2015/NOTE-WCAG20-TECHS-20150226/F14> > > Kevin > >> On 17 Sep 2015, at 18:40, shawn_slh <notifications@github.com <mailto:notifications@github.com>> wrote: >> >> ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ >> >> >> You can view, comment on, or merge this pull request online at: >> >> https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/pull/252 >> >> >> Commit Summary >> >> * intro text >> >> >> File Changes >> >> * *M* source/index.html.erb.md <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/pull/252/files#diff-0> (2) >> >> >> Patch Links: >> >> * https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/pull/252.patch >> * https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/pull/252.diff >> >> — >> Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub <https://github.com/w3c/wai-quick-start/pull/252>. >> >
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