- From: Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 02 Mar 2015 11:06:13 -0800
- To: "Shawn Henry" <shawn@w3.org>
- Cc: "Shadi Abou-Zahra" <shadi@w3.org>, wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <008FBF3D-74AF-4E50-9B32-D5C354C37CD3@w3.org>
Hi Shawn, I have just applied the changes, with two changes as outlined below. On 27 Feb 2015, at 12:31, Shawn Henry wrote: > [10:16] \* yatil notes that he has updated the table tutorials with > the wording of the tables cover page… > > Better! - except the first one seems to have been missed (and I think > that's the most important one to clarify the image :). > > Also, I think tweaking the others as below would help significantly by > decreasing the focus on the table categories: > \* "<h>Tables with two headers</h> Tables with two headers have a > simple row header and a simple column header." > -> <h>Tables with two headers</h> This page covers tables that have a > simple row header and a simple column header. > \* "<h>Tables with irregular headers</h> Tables with irregular headers > have header cells that span multiple columns and/or rows." > -> <h>Tables with irregular headers</h> This page covers tables with > header cells that span multiple columns and/or rows. > \* "<h>Tables with multi-level headers</h> Tables with multi-level > headers have multiple header cells associated per data cell." > -> <h>Tables with multi-level headers</h> This page covers tables that > have multi-level header cells associated per data cell. Here I used the following sentence: “This page covers tables that have __multiple__ header cells associated per data cell.” (We use this wording on the tables concepts page as well.) > Based on above, the first one would be: > <h>Tables with one header</h> This page covers tables that have with > one header for rows <strong>or</strong> for columns. > or even more clear: > <h>Tables with one header</h> This page covers tables that have with > one header for rows <strong>or</strong> one header for columns. > or to better differentiate it from the irregular and multi-level: > <h>Tables with one header</h> This page covers tables that have one > simple header for rows <strong>or</strong> one simple header for > columns. > > (I prefer the 2nd or 3rd option!) I have used the third option and changed the following sentence to flow better, see: https://github.com/w3c/wai-tutorials/commit/f47bb3414f43fbcce874eb4c6db47c74e3f4398e Cheers, Eric > > ~Shawn -- Eric Eggert Web Accessibility Specialist Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) at Wold Wide Web Consortium (W3C)
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