- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 2 Dec 2015 07:47:59 -0600
- To: Anna Belle Leiserson <ableiserson@gmail.com>, wai-eo-editors@w3.org
- Cc: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
On 12/1/2015 8:09 PM, Anna Belle Leiserson wrote: > I'm on this page http://w3c.github.io/wai-dynamic-planning/initiate/review_the_situation.html and I am noticing a pattern of using capital letters to start bullets that are part of one long sentence. I suggested changing this on the previous page in a pull request (http://w3c.github.io/wai-dynamic-planning/initiate/learn_the_basics.html) that involved some other things. I didn't want to make this second one a pull request though, since there aren't other issues. I won't mark it on other pages either, though I do think lowercase is less grammatically incorrect. There's a whole craziness about how to phrase the sentence before the colon which we aren't doing, and IMO is AOK to ignore. Thanks for bringing this up, Anna Belle! I apprecaite that you're commenting on such issues. For capitalization, I looked through lots of our pages, and see that we do it both ways, e.g., * <http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/people-use-web/principles> - caps * <http://www.w3.org/WAI/bcase/soc> - lowercase * <http://www.w3.org/WAI/users/inaccessible - both * <http://www.w3.org/WAI/users/involving> - both * <http://www.w3.org/WAI/older-users/> - both I think it depends on the type of info. I propose that we leave it up to editor's discretion based on the type of information. I put my suggestion in the style guide. I don't feel strongly about this and am happy for additional discussion and am fine with a different decision. (although I think it's not a priority to change existing documents) Punctuation: The punctuation also caught my eye. To be less formal, we have not been using punctuation in such cases. I added that to the style guide. Spacing: And a related issue: it bugs me to have space before lists like these! We get rid of them in many documents, e.g., <http://www.w3.org/WAI/users/inaccessible>. So I added that to the style guide as well, as optional. Style guide: I put all of these in a new section on Lists: <https://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/Style#Lists> And added a note to the Punctuation and Capitalization sections pointing to it. Feel free to tweak. (I didn't put much thought into the wording of the examples.) Best, ~Shawn
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