- From: Kevin White <kevin@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 16 Jun 2014 21:27:00 +0100
- To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hi Shawn, Thanks for the feedback. Actions are indicated below: On 16 Jun 2014, at 18:59, Shawn Henry wrote: > * Starting all the names with "J" is cute, but actually will make it less usable, I think. It will be easier to talk about them if the names are more distinct from each other. Done > * Please make the names more ethnically diverse (although good to keep easily pronounceable to most). (and remember to keep balanced number of males & females) Done - I have tried to get a mix. If there are any particular cultures you feel would benefit from inclusion please do say. > * If you can put a few-word summary in the heading with persona's name, I think it would help skimming and talking about them. e.g., > ** Joe - small business owner, outsourcing, no web dev knowledge > ** Jana - wants to increase awareness in org Done - I have also included the summary lines at the top of the section. > * Usual spacing for colons in prose is: "Organization size: Large" (rather than "Organization size : Large") -- but if you like it the extra space for this, I think it's fine. :-) Done - I am easy ;) Thanks a lot. Feel free to pass any other thoughts, comments, mud along ;) Kevin
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