- From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Mon, 02 Jun 2014 05:47:04 +0200
- To: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hello all, While reading the images tutorial, I have following notes. http://www.w3.org/WAI/tutorials/images/ 1. In all documents, may be missing commas after, "in this example", in this situation, in certain situations. 2. In images of text: a) I suspect one word is missing in following text: "This slogan image contains text with decorative effects that used to be impossible to be realized consistently across browsers by using CSS styling only." Proposed change: that are used? b) Alternative aproach for example1, comma may be missing: "To display the full effect the browser is required to support the following web technologies:" after effects. 3. Complex images: Paragraph before example 1: "but only where it’s important that the user understand the image" that the user understands or that the users understand. Best Sylvie -- Sylvie Duchateau Association BrailleNet Tél.: + 33 (0) 1 44 27 26 25 Fax : +33 (0) 1 44 27 34 38 Web: http://www.braillenet.org / http://www.accessiweb.org
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