- From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Thu, 07 Mar 2013 11:01:19 +0100
- To: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
- Cc: wai-eo-editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org>
Hello Shadi, While continuing the translation of BAD into French, I noticed following errors/problems on the follwoing page: After/annotated/template 1. Note 01: "The pages is uniquely identified" instead of: "The page is uniquely identified" or: "the pages are uniquely identified". I corrected it to singular in the French version But may be you wanted to talk about all pages? 2. In the same note: Following is written twice: once before the code example, and one after it. "Note: Improvements on the template are propagated throughout the entire website." We deleted the first one, before the code, that corresponds to what is done in other parts of the pages. 3. In note 2: there may be a problem with one word: "Skip-links appear when they are actived". Is actived English? Or is the word "activated"? 4. Note 03 talks about page redirection initiated by the user, but it seems that the explanation talks about automatic redirect. I am not sure it is appropriate. "Selecting an item from the drop-down menu automatically redirects the user to another page. This is confusing and disorienting to some users, especially keyboard users who are trying to move from one item to the next rather than actively selecting an item." 5. In note 05, the title seems to refer to a bad practice, not a good one: "Note 05: Script not compatible with some tools", didn't you mean the contrary? 6. In other parts of the demo pages, but I don't recall where, there was spelling mistakes of the word "instructions", that was written "instrtuctions" or some letters were at the wrong place. Sorry, I can't remember the exact place. That's all for now and hopefully the last time I bother you with those errors. Best regards Sylvie -- Sylvie Duchateau Association BrailleNet Tél.: +33 (0) 1 44 27 26 25 / Fax : +33 (0) 1 44 27 34 38 www.braillenet.org / www.accessiweb.org
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