Resending: Edit mistakes in standards harmonization doc

Hello Judy,
I used the wrong e-mail address and resend previous message.
While reviewing the  "[DRAFT] Why Standards Harmonization is Essential 
to Web Accessibility" document, version  2011-06-28$
at
http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/standards/standards_harmon.html
I noticed following edit mistake:
Heading h3  Develop translations and authorized translations as needed"
First paragraph, third sentence.
I noticed a repetition of words:
"Other documents can be can be translated under the general translation
policy."
2. I am not sure if this question needs EO approval or not.
Location: all document.
Current wording: through the document one finds the following term 
written differently: policy-makers and policy makers.
Sugested revision: harmonize.
Best and hearing you later today at the EO call.
Sylvie


Sylvie Duchateau
Association BrailleNet
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Received on Friday, 1 July 2011 12:34:43 UTC